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Fruit flies — Page 5
Page 5. - I made three versions: •1) Plain old English for simplicity; it only shows how angry he is. •2) Most likely botched German with an English subtitle that matches the bad French with English subtitles I had done earlier in Page 2. Seriously - my brain hurts after writing in French and German, but it’s a character trait I want to show in some form whether it’s right or wrong. 😭 •3) English inside a speech bubble with German flag colors 🇩🇪 to show that he’s speaking in German. It’s the other option in mind to use if I can’t write either French, German, or any other language properly but want to show that the character is speaking that language. It’s probably my best option to use though it can look a bit tacky. - With that explained, which one looks like the best option - 1, 2, or 3? Whatever gets the most likes/comments will be used in future pages. —